雅思作文人们选择越来越多（雅思作文21年10月23日真题）

各位学霸们好，今天黄老师给大家带来上周六（2021.10.23日）雅思大作文真题解析和范文，上周考题如下：，接下来我们就来聊聊关于雅思作文人们选择越来越多?以下内容大家不妨参考一二希望能帮到您!

雅思作文人们选择越来越多

各位学霸们好，今天黄老师给大家带来上周六（2021.10.23日）雅思大作文真题解析和范文，上周考题如下：

2021.10.23真题

Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

这道题的话题较为小众，本质上讨论的就是职业穿着的必要性，对此类话题没有思路或者词汇的同学请务必仔细背诵黄老师的范文。

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解题思路

对于这道题有三种写法：

1.一边倒：同意1 - 同意2 - 同意3 - 支持统一穿职业装（不支持同理）

2.让步法：反对1 - 同意1 - 同意2 - 支持统一穿职业装（不支持同理）

3.分类法：某些工作：需要统一着装 某些工作：不需要 - 取决于工作种类

这三种写法的难度依次递增。所以黄老师推荐同学们，对于这类不熟悉的话题可以采取一边倒或者让步法（哪些问题能写一边倒参照黄老师上周推文 - 《剑桥考官认可的段落结构》），分类法对于比较熟悉的话题较为好用，而且容易写的有道理从而拿一个高分。

那么，接下来我们就来看范文吧！（范文由黄老师从英文期刊杂志中摘抄好词好句写出，均为母语者词句，绝非中式英语，同学们可以放心背诵。）

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满分范文/词汇

2021.10.23真题

Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

满分词汇：

positive impression n. 积极的印象

professionalism n. 职业性

professional dress code n. 职业装准则

be inclined to v. 更愿意

crucial adj. 至关重要的

mandate v. 强制

representative n. 代表

支持段1：

Employees ‘appearance is often the first thing others notice about them, which means dressing professionally can help form a positive impression to people they meet in the workplace. Also, a professional dress code can help workers feel like them belong in spaceswith peers and supervisors while colleagues may be more inclined to include each other in important discussions and projects when appearing professional and committed. This is of great importance as being able to work with others is a crucial element of success in many professional environments.

支持段2：

Furthermore, mandating professional dress sends the message that both employers and employees are serious about the work they do, demonstrating that every member cares about representing him- or herself well at work. When all the members show that they take their job seriously, it can lead to a more motivatedand productive team.

支持段3：

As a member of an organization, every individual serves as a representative of the company to the public. Whether visiting clients or speaking with customers in a store, their appearance reflects on the business and therefore dressing professionally helps them present a positive, professional image of their organization to others.

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