英语写作案例教程（英语写作教学一电子邮件）

Writing——电子邮件

[文体指导]

英文电子邮件和书信的写法大致相同，但略有差异。一般说来英文电子邮件包括以下五个部分：

1．标题栏

一般写在左上角，包括发件人姓名、邮箱地址、发件日期、收件人姓名、邮箱地址以及邮件主题。

排列格式为：

FROM：发件人姓名、邮箱地址

DATE：发件日期

TO：收件人姓名、邮箱地址

SUBJECT：简明扼要地介绍信的内容。通常是单词、短语，偶尔用句子。

2．称呼

位于正文的开头。如何称呼，要看发件人与收件人的关系而定。若是同学、朋友，可以直呼其名；若是长辈或上级，要在姓氏前加上Mr，Miss，Mrs，Dr，Professor等表示称谓的词。

3．正文

正文要简洁明了。简单问候之后，就要开门见山地说明写信的目的。这部分内容的写作相对自由，但对于电子邮件的回复，须紧扣“回复”这一字眼，要“问有所答，疑有所解”。在高考中，要按照试题要求的内容来写，最重要的是表达要清楚、有条理，语言要准确、流畅。

4．信尾客套话

结尾的客套话通常很简洁，如Yours，Thanks等，一般写在左下角。

5．签名

一般写在左下角，有时也写在右下角。

[亮点句式]

常见的开头方式：

表示高兴：I was so glad/pleased/happy to receive your e­mail dated May 1st.

表示感谢：Thank you for your wonderful gift/interesting e­mail.

表示关心与询问：How are you these days? /How are you getting on these days? /How are you getting on with your work/studies?

表示抱歉：I am sorry that I did not reply soon but I have been very busy these days.

表示遗憾：I was sorry to learn that you did not do well in the examination./I am so upset to hear that you are ill these days.

常用的结束语有：

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Please give my regards to your family.

Take good care of you and keep in touch.

[写作任务]

假如你是李华，你在新学校学习已两个多月，请根据下列提示，用英语给你的朋友Jane写封电子邮件，谈一谈你的高中生活。

1．介绍你的学校和班级；

2．你的作息时间；

3．你的同学；

4．你最喜欢的老师。

注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

[审题谋篇]

体裁 记叙文

时态 一般现在时为主

主题 学校生活

人称 第一人称为主

结构 首段：提出写邮件目的；第二段：学校具体生活安排；第三段：作息安排。

[遣词造句]

Ⅰ.对接单元词汇

1．a well­known/famous school　　 一所著名的学校

2．amazing 令人惊讶的

3．get on/along well with sb. 与某人相处得好

4．way of teaching 教学方式

5．nothing like 完全不像

6．take part in after­class activities 参加课外活动

Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法

(一)完成句子

1．每间教室都有一台电脑和一个与电影院屏幕大小差不多的特殊屏幕。

Every room has a computer with a special screen，almost as big as a cinema screen.

2．我认为上她的课不会厌倦。

I don't think I will be bored in her class.

(二)句式升级

3．My favorite teacher is a very enthusiastic woman called Ms Wang.Ms Wang's way of teaching is nothing like that of my previous teachers.(用定语从句合并句子)

My favorite teacher is a very enthusiastic woman called Ms Wang，whose way of teaching is nothing like that of my previous teachers.

4．And there are sixty students in my class.They are all hard­working.(用定语从句合并句子)

And there are sixty students in my class，who are all hard­working.

[妙笔成篇]

【参考范文】

Dear Jane，

I've been at Senior High School for more than two months.I'm writing down my thoughts about my new school life.

My new school is a well­known school with a long history.There are 50 classes，more than 300 teachers and over 3,500 students in my school.The classrooms are amazing.Every room has a computer with a special screen，almost as big as a cinema screen.And there are sixty students in my class，who are all hard­working.I'm getting on very well with my classmates.My favorite teacher is a very enthusiastic woman called Ms Wang，whose way of teaching is nothing like that of my previous teachers.She usually tells us something in an interesting way.I don't think I will be bored in her class.

We usually get up at 6：30 and our class starts at 8：00.I always take part in colorful after­class activities and we go to bed at ten.

Bye for now!

Li Hua

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