雅思作文6.5范文（5.7大陆雅思大作文7分范文及解析）

双边类大作文，社会类话题

Some people think it is a better way to go abroad to find work and living opportunity, while others think staying in their own country is a better choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

题目来源：2022年5月7日大陆雅思大作文

1题目大意

有些人认为出国寻找工作和生活机会是更好的方式，而其他人认为留在自己的国家是更好的选择。讨论双方观点并给出自己的观点

2思路解析

这是一道双边类大作文，讨论的出国学习国内工作vs待在国内。双边类的题目，需要对每个观点分别表达同意或反对，最终的结论就是我的立场，可以是中立（双方都同意或都反对），也可以是单边支持某一方立场。审题是需要注意关键词“better”，因此两方观点存在一个比较的关系，你如果认同某一方需要说明为什么它比另一方好。下面，月半鸭和大家来看下具体观点。

首先来看出国的优劣势。

好处有两方面。一是对于打工人来说，能够出国工作意味着有更多的工作机会可选以及更好的收入，这能极大的改善自己和家人的物质生活。并且对于那些家乡有着严重混乱、失业等问题的人来说，能够出国工作无疑是一个谋求生计的方式。二是对于出国的人来说，能够开拓自己的视野，感受不同的文化环境和思维模式，提升自己的交流能力，这些对于其未来的工作生活都将有所助益。

坏处则在于出国可能会面临严重的语言障碍和文化隔阂，这些会让人感到不适甚至对生活造成负面影响，陌生的环境还会让人缺少安全感。同时，出国后身边缺少了熟悉的亲戚朋友，当遇到困难时当事人不得不自己面对和解决，无法和身边人倾诉并寻求帮助。

再来看留在国内的优劣势

好处有两方面。一是熟悉的语言和文化环境，以及家人和朋友的陪伴，更容易让人有安全感且舒适。（这点可以与上面的坏处对应）。二是在自己国家工作生活本身也是为了祖国的建设做出贡献，经济的发展、行业的发展、居住环境的改善等其实都是由每一个个体共同努力完成的，当自己的国家变得更好后，自己及晚辈的生活也会变得更好。

坏处则在前面的好处中也有提到，这样的选择意味着当事人可能放弃了更好的工作机会和更高的收入。

3提纲

4高分范文示例

Thanks to globalization, modern society has witnessed a growing number of citizens relocating abroad for work or study. While some people believe that it is better to stay in their home country, I consider that experiencing life abroad is a worthwhile chance.

There could be reasonable justifications against working or studying abroad. For dependent people who are unable to take good care of themselves, life in a foreign country equals incredible inconvenience. This is because they get used to a lifestyle in which relatives and friends are always around to lend a helping hand. As a result, they may find great difficulty in getting all sorts of problems settled on their own so as to adapt to a new environment or build relationships with locals when living abroad. In the long run, such wide disparity and cultural shock are likely to bring about physical and mental discomfort that interferes with their daily lives; while living in their own nation is undoubtedly a preferable option as it ensures sufficient security.

However, in the vast majority of cases, studying or working abroad offers significant advantages. For workers, exploring beyond one’s home country increases employment opportunities, especially for those who live in countries plagued by severe unemployment. In this way, pursuing job opportunities on a worldwide stage is an excellent alternative that provides employees with more options. For students, immersing themselves in another nation allows for the expansion of one’s horizons, the experience of social diversity, the development of cross-cultural communication skills, and the cultivation of well-rounded competencies, all of which are of critical significance in their future career path.

Overall, working or studying abroad definitely has a role to play in providing more opportunities for both employees and students, and it is thus advised to take this life option into consideration.

范文作者：张乔西

5相关词汇和语法结构

lend a helping hand 帮助

engage with 与人建立密切联系

cultural shock 文化冲击

sense of security 安全感

unemployment problem 就业问题

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